Well done Max, you have analysed the texts we looked at competently, well done. You have picked out words and have told me what they mean but had problems putting those ideas into paragraphs. As you have found here, ocabulary is often important in article writing in order to exaggerate meaning. Try to add photos onto this powerpoint of the DPS interviews you looked at - this is important to think about how they're structured on the page.
Well done Max, you have analysed the texts we looked at competently, well done. You have picked out words and have told me what they mean but had problems putting those ideas into paragraphs. As you have found here, ocabulary is often important in article writing in order to exaggerate meaning. Try to add photos onto this powerpoint of the DPS interviews you looked at - this is important to think about how they're structured on the page.
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